Would have said thanks to you...
But Today I thank Him,
For He granted with a friend, an angel to me
who found who I am,
A gem from God, a treasure to see,
She saw the beauty which is in me.
Never consumed with the friendship of ours,
Always gave the sensual feeling of being amidst flowers,
Spent many many and many moments with you ,
But they all seem to be very few
'Cause every moment happens to be a brand new .
All the colors in my life you brought ,
Could have just imagined in my thought ,
So believe it when I say ,
I will always cherish your friendship come what may .
Rising up in my life and Glaring like thousands sun ,
Making the sorrows go away never thought that you will be the one ,
When there was dark all around and blue ,
Would have said thanks to you…
But could never think of the friendship reward ,
Yet I tried 'cause it is just these words I could afford.
--Abhay Mittal--
Always gave the sensual feeling of being amidst flowers,
Spent many many and many moments with you ,
But they all seem to be very few
'Cause every moment happens to be a brand new .
All the colors in my life you brought ,
Could have just imagined in my thought ,
So believe it when I say ,
I will always cherish your friendship come what may .
Rising up in my life and Glaring like thousands sun ,
Making the sorrows go away never thought that you will be the one ,
When there was dark all around and blue ,
Would have said thanks to you…
But could never think of the friendship reward ,
Yet I tried 'cause it is just these words I could afford.
--Abhay Mittal--
27 comments:
hey nice poem relating to frndship
woww its to good and perhaps the wordings r good nad r rhyming
kp goin
hey...good poem...striked a chord...
well salute to all , who can rhyme it all.. nice one..
@ poonam..thanks for appreciating my style...
the one u rhymed gave me a smile :)
@sandeep
@solitary writer
thanks dude!!
hey.. really nice poetry!
keep posting!
amazin abhay
if u hv composed it urself
whch i feel u hv
luky gal
buddy gr8 poem along wid beautiful song.treat to visit your blog
@ matangi mawley--
thank you :)
@ shweta--
thanking you for ur thought that i have composed this one :)
@ ishan--
thanks dude!
very nice !!
hey as i said its really good
Spent many many and many moments with you ,
But they all seem to be very few
'Cause every moment happens to be a brand new .
Really liked this line...
wow
cool romantic one
really gud
well i hope u find such a worthy friend with whom u can share such moments in reality as well...;-)
everyone doesnt deserve to b such kinda fren...or is it?
@ gagan-- thank you
@ the solitary writer-- really? thanks to u as well.
@sajja--thank you so much sir! :)
@alex-- well u called it romantic..i think we have struck a chord! :O
@shubham--u need not hope..haha. and cmon..some are the best pals,,,if not everyone around you! :)
veryyy nice poem... keep it up Abhay..
nice poem man...liked it very much..
@khushi--thank you khushi..kavita padh kar aapko khushi hui..hum bhi prasann hue. :)
@T-REX-- thanks man
thank you to all fellow bloggers
nice usage of rhymes...seems like a string of couplets...
have a poetryblog as well...
www.thepoeticdiaries.blogspot.com
nice poem abhay...
@Rinzu--thank you
@Sapna--thank you sapna rani! :p
hey... nice poem...
@Ritika--Thank U! :)
quite rietly and aptly conveyed..hats off buddy..impressed
Thank you Jaz!
nice 1.. 1 suggestion though... u dnt always rhyme the stanzas... try widout that - some abstract poetry... it'd help bring out some new things in you :) Fun Blogging !
@ PriyAbrata-thanks for candid comments buddy! :)
Gud one.. I secnd priyo
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