Had you said yes …
To My only dream
How content I would seem
Happy forever I would have rested in peace
To the length where love won’t stretch and cease
Had you said yes …
To My tried intent
Of such a Truth as I have ever meant
Would have shown depth infinitely like a sea
Etched in you so could never forget me
Had you said yes…
You would have known my only crush
But you said No, so don’t now put me in a rush
Say not this, say not that
Forget not this, forget not that
To My tried intent
Of such a Truth as I have ever meant
Would have shown depth infinitely like a sea
Etched in you so could never forget me
Had you said yes…
You would have known my only crush
But you said No, so don’t now put me in a rush
Say not this, say not that
Forget not this, forget not that
--Abhay--
16 comments:
Simple, sweet and crisp !!
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN BUDDY AND U VE PUT ON MY BEST MUSIC AS THE TITLE TRACK...HEHE
wowww... da music blends perfectly wd da feel f da poem..gu dwork done!!! keep it up abhay..i wish aisa kuch koi mere liye bhi likhe..
@Hashan--Thank you :)
@Shubham--ur favorite music..hmm!thanks!
@Ashu--ha ha..thanks for such a cute comment!
hiii....
the thought is really good...
and ya, the music is appropriate...!!! :)
nice wrk bro..!!
btw, i think ppl shud kno..is sng ka suggestion kisne dia tha! :P
really a gr8 poem
@Ritika--thanks you for the worthy comments!
@Arush--haan haan pata hai
@Vinayak--Thanks!
well it was a great attempt...
i felt as if i am saying these lines to someone.
nice one buddy
Awww... Reminds me of the first poem I wrote... but of course it was a love tragedy.
Good work :)
Hey its a nice n beautiful poem with a awesum music
no appreciation 4 u bcoz u r alwz gud in all these (hahahhah)kidding dear.u alwz do the things in a graceful manner.
keep ur spirits high alwz
@Mujtaba--its my pleasure if u feel so. thanks!!
@me-hmm love tragedy..cheer up!! :)
thanks!
@Divya--thanks!!
sweet poem .... !! lovable !!
that is a sweet poem abhay!
i love the picture too
@Mohan--thank you buddy!
@Aparna--thanks for the appreciation.
thanks to all fellow bloggers and dear frends! :)
mast likha hai...
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