Ekpal koste hain khud ko
Anjaane mein tujhe yeh kya keh diya
Doosre pal sochte hain
Ki Kabul kar “haan , chahte hain tumhe” apne dil ka raaz khol diya
Khayalo mey to bas tum hi thi,
Tumhare khyalo mein koi aur tha
Gilaa karte to kya karte
Kisiki wafaa par na kisi ka zor tha
Jo tha mere man mein use chhudayaa sabne milkar
Kabhi sochte hain kya gunah kiya unse bolkar
Kehne ko to aur bohat kuch tha
Par bezuba ab hum hain unse chand lafz bolkar..
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14 years ago
30 comments:
it would be kind....if u give the eng version of what u have written...
this is a good one!
hmm...according to ur age u r agud poet in the making...keep up the gud work dude..!! u have that potential!
lovely poem man...yea its true..u feel like telling ur true feelings...but if ur rejected u feel u shudve shut up
Khayalo mey to bas tum hi thi,
Tumhare khyalo mein koi aur tha
yeh line superb hain :)
sahi likha hai bhai...keep writin
ABHAY....... very beautiful poem...
it says a lot if someone thinks deeply..... keep up the good work....
i dint knw dat u r a poet also.......nice wrk dude!!
beautiful...the only word which came to my mind after going thru ur poem--bezuba ab hum hain..!!
tooo gud yaar.... tu to die hard romantic hai...... teri gf bahut lucky hogi.........
heheehehehhe....:)
the day i wud have 1...u wud b the first 1 who wud get to knw..thats a promise!! ;)
thanks sonal!:)
this is seriously good..m flattered..! well done! music compliments ur writings ..!
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hey...abhay tujhme ye talent bhi hai..wow yaar!!!! wot feelings!!! aisa lagta hai k emotns padhe jaa rahe hain
jab dil ke hath kalam lagta hai... to kuch aise he khyaal bahar aate hain... jise pad kar sab kahen are ye to mere mann ki baat likhi hai.. samjhlo kisi dil waale ne likhi hai.. bt u knw abhay one line in dis poem is...... i mean m speechless after goin thru dat.. u knw wat m sayin.... bt ek baat btaun.. jab bhi dil bolta hai.. hum bezuban kyun hi jaate hain?? kyunki tab hum wo nai kehte jo dikhta hai ya suna hai,jo ki hum puri zindagi karte aaye hain,balki wo bolte hain jo iss dil ne mehsoos kiya hai.. ya fir ye kahun.. tab hum bolte kam aur mehsoos zyada karte hain... "bezuban" ho jaate hain...
hey try to use the hindi script itself as the effort in converting to hindi script while reading spoils the rhythm.. this is a good poem buddy..
Gilaa karte to kya karte
Kisiki wafaa par na kisi ka zor tha
i love these lines.. i love ur usage of words lke gila and alam as in ur last poem
u have the coolest widgets buddy.. and a nice template to go with it..
very well written. dont take it otherwise but i wud say tht this line "Jo tha mere man mein use chhudayaa yaaron ne milkar" does not belong to the same class as others.
otherwise grt post.
btw, probably u wud like this one on my blog:
http://virajgupta.blogspot.com/2008/01/blog-post.html
cheers :)
hmmmm,, awesome yar! wow, abhay. m inmpressed..waise i got it,, u knw. uhu uhu.
dis poem is a combination of beautiful hrt n mind.. amazing.. keep it up. cheers !!!
yaar..
seriously...
plz dont mind,,
but.. where ever i go..
i see heartbreakes only!!
nicly written ...
thanks for ur concern! :)
hey abhay i guess every teenage can relate himself to this song...this poem is so universal in itself..each and every word true...
well done...superb...reallly nice!!
all positive supelative appreciation for you:)
i go by every word dude..its really superb..
keep posting
Some nice work BUt it would have been better if the font was HINDI too....Looks nice :)
Cheers!
nice blog
nice poem
nice widgets
most of all, amazing template.. have never seen a better template...
plz send me the code of ur template... i want a 3 column template...
Well-expressed.
Keep it up!
hey yar its really fantastic i cant even imagine that u can write so well but frend mann gaye tujhe ....... pure dil se likhi hai, all poems r the best
shweta..there are two ways to share your sorrows...one is to share it with an intimate fren and second is to--let the feelings flow and take the shape of words or a poem....u have been there in both the ways...shweta u say u cant even imagine that i can write this well....i think u knw more than that....that is HOW i have written this well...something which hardly nyone knows! :)
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