पूछा किसी ने मेरे बारे में ,
तो आज ये ख़याल आया
नज़र नजाने हमें लगी किसकी ,
ना जाने हम कब बदल गए
पूछता है कोई हमसे ये हुआ क्या है ,
बताने में अब अल्फाज़ कम पड़ गए
दिल की बात कहते हैं कैसे
ये हमें मालूम नहीं था
अदा थी उसमें पर ,
हम में कोई अंदाज़ नही था
प्यार है कितना ये तुमसे
कह पाया नहीं हूँ ,
पर जब से गए हो मुझे तनहा कर के ..
सच कहूँ ….मैं ठीक से मुस्कुराया नहीं हूँ …
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14 years ago
35 comments:
well u know one thing abhay...i was listening to one of mah favourite songs and after reading dis.....i literally had a tear in my eyes....i can well understand dis....the last two lines r really very true....
hey beautiful poem dude.. seems u are deeply in love.. or is it jus a poem? this poem has its voice frm ur heart.. she wil come back.. kisi ki bhi nazar nahin laga.. its jus a phase
hmmmmmm so dere u go u r even getting blessings from oder ppl as well......wow now that shows intensity of ur love
@manorath
thanks for ur concern and understanding the feelings of my poem
@shubham
take it easy dude!! :)
nice poem dude
keep it up
checkout mine blog
http://www.superstarvinayak.blogspot.com
nice poem dude..nice way to bring out the feelings..
kabhi kabhi zindagi mein ek aisa waqt aata hai jab hum chahkar bhi kuch nahi kar sakte...u can just wish..us waqt jo khyaal dil mein aate hain agar wo kagaz par utar jaayein shayad use he log kavita kehta hain!
and as they say--
there is a little bit of poet in everyone of us but everyone of us is not a poet...its just that u shud have ur prerna [inspiration] with you. :)
hey abhay marvellous man really believe me i was not hoping that ur such a gr8 poet beleive me ....
gd wrk done man keep it up
"Par jab se gaye ho mujhe tanha kar ke..
sach kahun….main theek se muskuraaya nahi hun…"
beautiful
beautifully written !
pretty nice post.. emotions r well xpressed..
kya baat hai? lovely..bahut time se maine koi sher nahin likhi hai, aapki kavita padhne ke baad shayad likhunga..u can call it nostalgia [:p]
keep writing
bahut khoob!
gr8 wrk abhay... keep it up.... i never knw u write sooo well...... gud luck 4 ur wudb gf ;)
nice work yar..mein bhi kuch aisa hi likh raha hun..kabhi mere blog ko visit kar lena..and feel free to let your thoughts flow..
http://hindipandit.blogspot.com
kiske liye likhi h ye poem ;)
ossum dude......fatte chak die tune to...wah d gr8 poet....
main ye nahi jaanta tumhe kiski nazar lagi hai lekin ye jaanta hoon ki poem bahoot acchi thee
http://www.superstarvinayak.blogspot.com
hey abhay i did not know u can write poetry too:P..jokes apart....
a really commendable job and a fantabulous expression of ur feelings:)
got to know pyar insaan ko kya kya sikha deta hai;)
nice poem!!!!!!!
u must try ur hand @ lyrics for movies...
they always fall in love...
and get betrayed
chk out
http://www.supershiva.blogspot.com
http://www.versatilecollection.blogspot.com
@ shiva
ha ha....thanks for the suggestion mate..but fist of all ..i have not been betrayed.!
also these are the feelings close to my heart..and u never sell ur feelings ...do u?
thanks for ur worthy comments. :)
@ misha
hey yaar c'mon.... main poem waise nahi likh sakta kya??? ;)
mast hai dude..
kya poem hai!!!
:-)
keep posting!!
cheers!
ha..ha hey u say that "main aise he poem nahi likh sakta"..bt beleive me no1 wud trust it.
atleast not me. kavita aise he nahi nikalti..u shud have ur inspiration or prerna with u...ye baat kahin suni hui lagti hai,haina?
all the best
ur fren--
parul
@ parul
me too thinks so. ;)
jokes apart .gud job done abhay!
hmm sounds too romantic
bt heart breaking as well mixed with the feelings of hope. gud luck
:)
kisko dedicate kiya hai,ye to bata do.
kidding..gd job
nice way to xpress feelings.
stay in contact!
annanya_libra20@yahoo.com :)
@nisha
hehehe.. dedicated to mahself! :)
thanks to nisha
thanks to all
very romantic.
ha ha ha toooo goood yar never expected ke ap kuch esa bhe kar sakte ho.....! by d way dear ye kis ke leye hai ... i hope i don't know her
as much as i knw u bhai, u ve always been 1 of dose people who r fun loving nd ultimately hilarious nd nvr let ne1 remain sad or num.... but nw i wanna say a line fr u "haste chehre ka gham parna bahut mushkil hota hai".... i wish dat u get ur true luv soon in ur lyf....
heyy nice one buddy .. but i hope its not the real case with you :)
hope you have smiles in every day and night .. God Bless
~~~ Golden Vulture ~~~
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